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BSG - Children of the Revolution

Children of the Revolution, also known as, "the TS Eliot Project"

Basic premise, to extort "The Wasteland" and "The Hollow Men" to bracket little bits on some of the lesser kids of the Galactica.



Title: Children of the Revolution ("The TS Eliot Exercise")
Author: plum ([info]zeplum)
Rating: PGish, for language
Disclaimer: Don't own any of it, even in my best delusions of grandeur.
A/N: Set between the mini and the first half of the first season.




*****

Kept the hours
With a dead sound on the final stroke of nine


*****


"Why do the Cylons come every thirty-three minutes? Why isn't it thirty-four or thirty-five or --"

Cally had always been an inquisitive child. From the time she could crawl, she wanted to investigate, pull things apart to see how they worked. Her parents indulged her, providing answers to her endless questions when they could. It was the greatest gift they gave her.

The Chief is good to her. Treats her like the kid sister she thinks he probably never had. He answers her questions, teaches her things she didn't know how to do before, but even he has a breaking point.

"Cally?"

"What?"

"Shut up."

Not much has changed since the end of the world. There's a routine around the deck -- Vipers and Raptors to fix and overhaul, pilots to coddle, grease under her nails, never ending exhaustion. Nothing new, just more of one and less of another: more frustration, less bodies to take it out on.

But Cally still wonders why -- about everything and anything. She'll keep on asking questions, dead sober or punch drunk, because she knows it will finally be over when someone stops answering.

*****

The hope only
Of empty men


*****


A job worth doing is worth doing well. And for him, most every job is worth doing -- like playing errand boy for Dr. Gaius Baltar, even if those errands involve a distracted and spur of the moment plea for blood oranges and massage oil.

Gaeta is always happy to snap to and do what is asked of him, and he takes a selfless pride in performing even the most menial of tasks.

Calculate the next FTL jump? Yes, sir -- and here's a way to do it so that all the heads on-ship are cleaned out while we're at it! Look adoringly at Dr. Baltar as he twitches violently and talks to an invisible companion? If it boosts the doctor's ego so the Cylon detector will come on-line more quickly, he will beam and follow Baltar around like love sick puppy.

Even the smallest of actions can result in fantastic consequences, of this Gaeta is well aware. That's why he plays the role of Number One Bridge Bunny with such attention and patience. Somewhere along the way his actions will influence the future, even if it's in a very tiny way.

Gaeta has faith in the future, and so he pays attention to what he does in the present.

*****

I think we are in the rats' alley
Where the dead men lost their bones.


*****


She's seen memorials like this before. Shining faces looking down at her, static, tacked up on walls by loved ones. She had friends on that wall back home. Mothers and fathers of her friends, relatives that she'd never know. All cut down by Zarek's ambition and idealism.

Freedom fighter. He was nothing more than a butcher. There wasn't enough left to carry out the proper funeral rights -- but they still prayed for the souls of the dead.

Dualla has seen the effects of death on a large scale before. She survived once, and she will survive again. Finding an empty space on one of the walls, she tacks up the picture she carries.

5,251 Saggitarons survive.

*****

Unreal City
Under the brown fog of a winter dawn


*****


He lost the last of his group this morning. He has been running from the Cylons for three days now. He's surviving on little to no sleep, an injured leg, and the anti-radiation injections. When he stops to think about it, Helo starts to wonder if maybe it's the radiation that's keeping him alive at this point, somehow keeping those hulking, deadly toasters away from him.

He takes it as a sign that its gone too far -- he's starting to crack up. Running for your life will do that to a guy.

Helo reaches a ridgeline at mid-day and taking a chance, climbs out to the edge to look upon Caprica City for the first time since the attacks. He knows the city well: the best place to grab a bowl of miso soup in the middle of the night, the block where one girlfriend lived and his last girlfriend probably died. The attacks came mid-morning local time. She would've been running out for coffee when the first bombs went off.

He doesn't know why he keeps running. There is no where to go, but Helo keeps on going. He's a leader of one now, and by the Lords of Kobol, he's going to take out a few more of those metal bastards before it's his turn to go.

*****

What are the roots that clutch, what branches grow
Out of this stony rubbish?


*****


Somewhere on the fourth day (though with all the FTL jumps, Billy isn't precisely sure) he realizes that he's not part of an interim government. No, President Roslin and those on this small ship are in the process of forming a new, permanent leadership -- and he's right in the middle of it, like a civics lesson come to life.

He's so busy that he can almost forget how this all came about. He has fuzzy notions besides; he didn't see the destruction of his home first hand. Didn't see the worlds thrown into a state of pestilential chaos. However, he did see thousands left behind because their ships weren't capable of a faster than light jump. Thousands died because the government, his government didn't start the transfer in time to save them all.

Were decisions always this hard?

All he wanted was to be the aide to the Minister of Education -- form contacts, learn policy, advance his own career. Now he's aide to the President of the Twelve Colonies, or what's left of them. Billy will trade it all in a heartbeat.

*****

The eyes reappear
As the perpetual star


*****


Even on the days when the CAG has something lodged up his ass (no doubt wedged there by Starbuck) and Boomer is even moodier than usual, Crashdown counts himself lucky. If he hadn't been on the Galactica during the attacks, his ass would've been so much irradiated meat, probably on some godforsaken icy moon of Picon, scanning for mineral deposits.

So, life is hard Post. That's what Crashdown thinks of it as, Post-Everything That Came Before. Things go on, and one of those is life being hard. He didn't have it easy when there were still twelve colonies. He still had to struggle and learn and work. He didn't make as much money as he would've liked, and his girlfriends were always a little too something -- something that didn't make them last too long. He worked long shifts for little regard or praise and tried to unwind with a game of pyramid.

Not much has changed. He does his job, sticks up for his friends, and tries to win a few games of cards. And if that cute Ensign Davis continues to sit next to him in the mess, well, Crashdown's not going to argue.

Same as it ever was.

-end-





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[info]babylil

March 28 2005, 11:31:57 UTC 7 years ago

Oooh, I like this! Especially the bit about Cally. I think she deserves fic, for some reason. I'm not sure what it is I like about her, but there's something. It's always nice to see some 'underling' POV. Not to mention some fic I can read without being scared of being spoiled!

Only two episodes to go 'til I'm caught up! *g*

[info]zeplum

March 28 2005, 12:47:01 UTC 7 years ago

Everyone loves Cally -- it's wonderful! I know there are some people writing her, but I'm not positive where it is or how good.

Finish soon! Finish soon! *g*

[info]voleuse

March 28 2005, 11:43:35 UTC 7 years ago

Oh! This is perfect. Sad and beautiful and sad, and yummy supporting character background, to boot.

[info]zeplum

March 28 2005, 12:48:38 UTC 7 years ago

It's sad when I didn't mean for it to be sad. Gah, I live in a world of opposites. :)

Going off of TS as source material, it might be hard to fail. Glad to think that maybe I didn't. *g*

[info]storydivagirl

March 28 2005, 12:08:39 UTC 7 years ago

This is a great piece. I love all the different perspectives with the same theme of simply going on. Sad, but potent. Lovely.

[info]zeplum

March 28 2005, 12:50:18 UTC 7 years ago

Well, it was sorta the fault of the drabble ideas that you and bantha dropped off. (I WILL write those, btw.) It kinda combined with an existing notion, and then, poof!

I'm very much glad you liked it. *hugs*

[info]desire_of_mind

March 28 2005, 13:06:16 UTC 7 years ago

Lovely piece. Adored the Cally bit (She'll keep on asking questions, dead sober or punch drunk, because she knows it will finally be over when someone stops answering).

Overall, great descriptions and writing--it was almost lyrical, at points. :D

[info]zeplum

March 29 2005, 05:26:33 UTC 7 years ago

Cally's was one of the first that came to me. I love that bit from '33' and have always wanted to do something with it.

I'm super glad you liked it! Thanks for the feedback!

[info]brynnmck

March 28 2005, 13:21:22 UTC 7 years ago

This was brilliant. One of the things I love most about BSG is that even the secondary characters are fascinating, and it's so good to see good fic written about them. Thank you!

[info]zeplum

March 29 2005, 05:28:32 UTC 7 years ago

It was a exercise, and you're right, they give us quite a lot to work with considering these are secondary characters.

Oh, and dude, your icon cracks me up. Perfect. :)

[info]brynnmck

7 years ago

[info]bantha_fodder

March 28 2005, 15:51:03 UTC 7 years ago

I absolutely adore the Gaeta cut.

But I love all of this. These little snippets from their lives. Love.

[info]zeplum

March 29 2005, 05:30:04 UTC 7 years ago

There's a (earnest) little smartass hiding under there. I can't help but love him -- the Baltar following, and the fact that his name rhymes with mine.

Thanks for the rec, btw!

[info]fourteenlines

March 28 2005, 18:55:50 UTC 7 years ago

Oh, wonderful! I'm so glad you finished. I really liked the added Helo & Billy pieces, but you know what? For some reason it's the Dualla section that really got me. The last line is...yeah.

[info]zeplum

March 29 2005, 05:33:18 UTC 7 years ago

I think D's is the strongest, the image the most powerfull. Very old school kathe by the construction. Helo was surprisingly easy, and Billy I just pulled out of thin air because dammit, he needed to be included. I swear I've got a block on him due to the fugly shirts. :)

I've got quotes for Sharon, Lee and Kara bits, but I think I'm going to let those drift around for a while. See what develops.

[info]rhi_silverflame

March 28 2005, 19:41:03 UTC 7 years ago

This was great all around -- particularly love Cally, Gaeta, and Crashdown.

Calculate the next FTL jump? Yes, sir -- and here's a way to do it so that all the heads on-ship are cleaned out while we're at it!

This line still has me giggling. How very, very Gaeta.

[info]zeplum

March 29 2005, 05:30:49 UTC 7 years ago

particularly love Cally, Gaeta, and Crashdown.

I think they're my favourites too. Esp. Crash.

[info]ancalemon

March 28 2005, 20:35:26 UTC 7 years ago

This was an excellent piece of work. Very good job.

[info]zeplum

March 29 2005, 05:33:31 UTC 7 years ago

Thank you!

[info]nickless

March 28 2005, 21:14:04 UTC 7 years ago

Okay, now I need to find a way to get all the eps so I can figure out exactly who these people are, dammit.

*grumble*

Damn you, Fandom Addiction Fairy! ;P

[info]zeplum

March 29 2005, 05:34:32 UTC 7 years ago

*snicker*

They're going to start rerunning the eps on April 8th, btw. I'll trade you that info for SAAB tapes when you get a chance to breathe. :)

[info]nickless

7 years ago

[info]zeplum

7 years ago

[info]nickless

7 years ago

[info]burntcopper

March 29 2005, 04:51:29 UTC 7 years ago

MMMM, greatness. 'Number One Bridge Bunny' should also now be Gaeta's official nickname, methinks.

[info]zeplum

March 29 2005, 05:35:43 UTC 7 years ago

Bridge Bunny is one of those terms from the old show that I can't give up. Dualla might not fit the mold, but Gaeta strangely does. And it's so *cute* on him.

I second your motion!

[info]smashsc

March 29 2005, 06:21:28 UTC 7 years ago

Dude.

BSG! Eliot!

Um, I have a bit of an Eliot obession (*points to icon*) and tend to see his words in everything I love and this is just.... I'm in awe.

Off to reread.

[info]zeplum

March 29 2005, 07:04:34 UTC 7 years ago

I pretty much hate poetry, but Eliot is golden.

They fit soooo well together, don't they?

[info]comedownstairs

March 29 2005, 06:36:55 UTC 7 years ago

*loves you*
*adds to memories, cuz damn*

[info]zeplum

March 29 2005, 07:05:08 UTC 7 years ago

Heh. Random ideas are the good ones it seems.

[info]thepouncer

March 29 2005, 09:46:47 UTC 7 years ago

Billy made me cry. And Dualla made me ache. And Helo! And Crashdown! I love this look at the minor characters, the way that each of them is trying to survive the destruction of their entire world.

[info]zeplum

March 29 2005, 12:03:48 UTC 7 years ago

Crash is my personal fave, but I think Dualla lands like a knockout punch.

I'm so v. v. glad you got so much out of this little thing! Thanks for your feedback!

[info]liz_marcs

April 4 2005, 11:55:37 UTC 7 years ago

Lovely.

Here because [info]smashsc recced this.

[info]zeplum

April 6 2005, 06:02:37 UTC 7 years ago

thank you! And kudos to the icon. *g*

[info]inlovewithnight

April 4 2005, 11:58:47 UTC 7 years ago

Oh, love this. The minor characters really bring the show to life. Here's hoping they get more screen time next season. :)

[info]zeplum

April 6 2005, 06:03:23 UTC 7 years ago

So many stories to tell. I hope we get a little bit more back story on the other kids as well.

Glad you liked!

[info]ingridmatthews

April 5 2005, 07:32:35 UTC 7 years ago

Oh, this was GREAT! Loved all these guys and the glimpse into their heads.

*loves*

[info]zeplum

April 6 2005, 06:04:05 UTC 7 years ago

Woo!

*dances* Ingrid liked! I feel all warm and fuzzy now. :)

[info]lepetitarsenic

April 18 2005, 18:09:06 UTC 7 years ago

Straight-up fangirling Crashdown's bit. "And if that cute Ensign Davis continues to sit next to him in the mess, well, Crashdown's not going to argue." Guh! So damn human, in a very drama and angst-ridden world. There really ought to be much more Crashdown fic, and Cally fic, and Dee fic... hence I am adding this to my memories, and friending you.

[info]zeplum

April 19 2005, 05:15:40 UTC 7 years ago

Crash is the man. Don't make him leader of an away team, but yeah, I love him anyway. :)

[info]livilla

April 28 2005, 10:15:55 UTC 7 years ago

I like this. They're probably the most overlooked characters. Great job on getting into their heads. :)

And Cally rocks, so I can't turn down fic with her in it.

[info]zeplum

May 14 2005, 09:02:23 UTC 7 years ago

Cally's the darling of the fandom. She doesn't deserve anything less. :)

[info]cupidsbow

May 13 2005, 04:10:37 UTC 7 years ago

It's wonderful. Even though nothing dreadful actually happens, a sense of doom permeates everything.

[info]zeplum

May 14 2005, 09:03:45 UTC 7 years ago

And here I was trying for this underlying sense of hope, but not in the normal sugary sort of way.

Damn the need to always be contrary! *g*

[info]ysrith

May 18 2005, 03:41:53 UTC 7 years ago

[info]ancarett just rec'd this on [info]bsgficrecs, and I had to comment. This is gorgeous. There's a lovely mix of despair and hope, and the characterizations, esp Crashdown and Cally are just great.

Thanks for sharing this with us.

[info]hackthis

July 26 2005, 17:57:10 UTC 6 years ago

All he wanted was to be the aide to the Minister of Education -- form contacts, learn policy, advance his own career. Now he's aide to the President of the Twelve Colonies, or what's left of them. Billy will trade it all in a heartbeat.

*adores*

Billy! And Dee! And Helo! I so adore Helo. :D

[info]zeplum

July 27 2005, 05:41:38 UTC 6 years ago

I've learned at the foot of the best, darlin'.

Helo's prime woobie material. Also helps that he fills out a flight suit so well. *g*

[info]hackthis

6 years ago

[info]raincitygirl

August 25 2005, 19:31:03 UTC 6 years ago

Oh man, this is so very well done. I think Dualla's was my favourite, but they're all good.

[info]ancarett

September 7 2006, 01:48:43 UTC 5 years ago

I am finally getting around to leaving feedback on this lovely little series of gracenotes and I'm reccing this on [info]crack_van. Sorry I never posted any comments the first time I read this (I think I was reading on my handheld and I don't like to login from there).

[info]zeplum

September 12 2006, 17:08:16 UTC 5 years ago

Thanks very much for the rec, and I'm so glad you enjoyed the story. It's perhaps my personal favourite of all I've written for BSG, so that just makes whatever joy that much sweeter.

[info]brandil

September 7 2006, 13:15:25 UTC 5 years ago

Wow, I had chillbumps from start to finish. Great job.

[info]zeplum

September 12 2006, 17:08:27 UTC 5 years ago

thansk!
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